Design Visualisation, Project Two, Blog Two

I have now chosen the three ideas I think will be most successful out of the eight I brainstormed. I have taken, 'Murder', 'Organise' and 'Elevator', and created a one page storyboard for each.

This is my brainstorm with my original 8 ideas.

This is my storyboard for 'Murder', this seems as if it may be successful, however I am wondering whether it would be better to use more than just a long shot the whole time to make it more interesting, and create more horror which is associated with murder, although this could possibly over complicate it.

This is my storyboard for 'Organise', again this could be successful, however what I am concerned about is that it is almost multiple projects in one as it shows the meaning in multiple words such as 'rise' 'sag' etc whilst organising itself, I'm wondering whether this over complicates it taking it away from what it is, 'organise', or whether it enhances it.

This is my storyboard for 'Elevator', I think this is my personal favorite, however I am concerned that this clip may focus too heavily on the narrative of the characterised letters, not enough on the actual letters. For this clip, unlike 'Murder', I decided not to just keep it on a wide/long shot instead to have mid-shots/close-ups to help the narrative and explain the elevator function, I am not sure whether this will be successful or not.

 Now I must decide on my final storyboard and begin to create using Flash.